Saturday, April 1, 2023

Discovery: Bad Poetry

What, Magaly Guerrero asked the Poets and Storytellers United writing group at https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/2023/03/friday-writings-70-discovery.html , have we discovered lately?

I toyed with the idea of writing something silly about discovering, uncovering, and dish covering, but Sherry Marr, who has sometimes participated in P&SU writing challenges, suggested a better idea at https://stardreamingwithsherrybluesky.blogspot.com/2023/03/just-one-more-wayfarer.html .

If you must pity
a white-haired crone,
pity a gall
or kidney stone;

pity a fall
that breaks a hip;
an eroding tooth
that distorts the lip;

cancer or cardiac 
disease,
pity as freely
as you please;

pity the loved ones
gone to come
no more, to the old
hollow home.

But never pity
the white-haired crone
who, as survivor,
lives alone:

the quiet morning's
salute to sun,
the chores to do
and the projects run

when almost every
productive day,
her work is done right,
her own way.

Oh, pity not 
our hermit bliss.
We worked all through our
youth for this.

14 comments:

  1. How wonderful! I too savour my 'hermit bliss'.

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  2. To be able to live how one chooses? Bliss indeed...

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  3. So true..more power to them!!

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  4. There is resounding truth in these words that you put so artfully: "But never pity the white-haired crone
    who, as survivor, lives alone … "

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  5. WELL! I am one of the white haired crones and mighty proud to be one too. Both hips, titanium, facing some sort of shoulder repair (hoping not a replacement), left knee may be permanently swollen (had the cortisone and PT) time to check hearing, back in and out from time to time! However I will take all these maladies on and them some to retain my "status among the living." Your poem is pure delight.

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    1. I hope the shoulder is reparable! Thank you for visiting.

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  6. Ah yes, we crones are cool! (Sara McNulty)

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