Friday, November 15, 2024

Ode to the Long Awaited November Rain

In a land of endless summer
smoke and dust make brazen air
like a greenhouse glass; a bummer
if we live or sojourn there.

So returning to the moody
places where four seasons roll
and November's bleak and broody
is refreshing to the soul.

Though the air's a long time cleaning,
in the end the scent of rain
gathers to itself the meaning
of refreshment for the brain.

Hail the bleakness of November
onto which we can project
all things tedious to remember
(even those that we elect),

stash provisions in a bunker,
break out quilts and rocking chairs,
gather with our cronies, hunker
round the fire like sleepy bears,

until positively freezing
wind blows in to dissipate
mists of all that's been unpleasing,
and we eagerly await

ice and snow and all December's
round of primal winter-bliss;
sing and dance around the embers,
light the next fire's logs from this.

We can do without November,
some say. Do they say amiss?
Frostless, colorless September
said to us, this year: Remember
winter's own peculiar bliss. 

This poem was suggested by Rosemary Nissen-Wade, who lives where November is a spring month:

14 comments:

  1. I love this insouciant piece! (And particularly the irreverent rhyme of summer with bummer.) Unlike the narrator of this poem, I hate the cold, and have chosen to live in the (Australian) sub-tropics, where I am glad of our present spring.

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    1. Well, enjoy it! I'm glad the world's big enough to have room for all tastes :-)

      PK

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  2. Your beautiful rhythmic exploration of seasonal contrasts reminds us that even the grayest months hold meaning.

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    1. Thank you for visiting and commenting.

      PK

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  3. A nice way to hibernate...like sleepy bears hunkering down with quilts around the fire. Enjoy your winter. Bet the stash of provisions holds some delicious treats. Like your rhyming couplets.

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  4. I wonder how the seasons will become more intense as the climate changes...the smoke and dust of summer and the primal winter bliss...a lovely run down of the seasons in your poem.

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    1. Al Gore thought Miami would be under water by now...Global warming would indeed make summers more intense, the way local warming already does. Little danger of heat becoming deadly at the Cat Sanctuary but, in the small city ten miles south, that's a real possibility.

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  5. This is some very nice rhyming. Well done!

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  6. A beautifully composed poem! "November's bleak and broody is refreshing to the soul" ~~ I wholeheartedly agree with until the showers turn to snow.

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  7. "Hail the bleakness of November
    onto which we can project
    all things tedious to remember
    (even those that we elect),"

    Love this poem, and the rhyming is excellent!

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    1. Thank you, Purple. I think the tradition of having elections in November was based in the idea of counting paper ballots after most of the farm work was done, but they have been bleak and tedious lately, haven't they?

      PK

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