The proper name of this kind of "poem" is doggerel--not an insult if doggerel is what a "poet" chooses to write. I wanted to respond to a prompt at Poets & Storytellers United at the same time everyone else did. A poem did not come to mind. Sometimes doggerel leads the way to a poem, for me, and sometimes it gets the idea out of my system, the way talking about an idea does with prose writing.
As a child I never liked to sit.
Miss Rosemary used to like to knit.
She was not a sitter; only one
of the women who worked in Mother's salon.
Why she was my favorite, I don't know.
She liked to knit; Mother liked to sew.
I borrowed knitting needles to play
they were all sorts of things--till taken away.
We stayed in that town just a year or two.
What became of Rosemary we never knew.
As a teenager, when I was making plans
I made a gesture with my hands
to tell the siblings to go away
while I finished thinking of what to play.
The siblings would heed that sign; they knew
I'd soon give them something new to do.
Just why I moved my hands that way
I didn't know till I heard Mother say
"That was how Miss Rosemary used to knit;
you sat still when you were watching it."
As a young adult I did things for profit.
Fancy work? I said. Come off it!
That was--until I had White House flu.
Out to Woolworth's my sister flew,
knowing only old people died of the flu
and I'd feel better soon if I'd something to do.
Needles in a tube and yarn in a bag
poked up my mood, which was starting to sag.
I sat right up and started knitting
with many a clumsy beginner's mistake,
and the mistakes only improved the fitting
of the Eighties Sweater I'd chosen to make.
I had learned the method as a little kid.
I knit the way Miss Rosemary did.
This is not yet a sweater. It's one of a basket of sweater sleeves knitted as samples that are going into my "Knitting In Progress Album" at Ko-fi. People can commission the rest of the sweater shown, or commission me to knit something else with the yarn, or just buy the yarn. In this case the yarn is bright red cotton. The name-brand yarn I bought is sold at a downscale craft store near my home. Wal-Mart sells a generic version that's spun and dyed in the same place, so you could currently buy yarn that would be almost identical to this. It'll take years of washing to fade to a soft mauve as shown by the cell phone camera.
Doggerel is a good word for it. Me, I call it rambling. I like your story. I can see it happening in my mind as you tell it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Su-sieee!
DeleteDoggerel or not, I enjoyed the read. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you; I'm glad you did.
DeleteOh, I think this is a cut above doggerel! And your knitting has obviously gone beyond 'clumsy beginner' stuff too. (And of course I think your role model had a very superior name.)
ReplyDeleteIndeed she had! Thank you for the compliments.
DeleteI so enjoyed this poem - and that is a beautiful knit pattern you are working on. A really lovely stitch.
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DeleteOne of the most delightful posts I've read ... I will remember for quite some time when a poet I enjoy intimated that what I had written was 'doggerel.' Ouch.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting, Helen. Yes, it stings to have what one meant to be a poem called doggerel...but there is such a thing as "good doggerel," as found in picture books and raps, and that was my goal here.
DeleteThat's a beautiful pattern!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rommy!
DeleteI really like this one, the poem and the knitting. I enjoyed the rhythm and the glimpses into the life of a child, and said life affects the adult she becomes.
ReplyDeleteThank you! We never know what kind of influence we may have on a child...
DeleteGorgeous pattern in that knitting, and a wonderful poem. My mother knitted all the time, but it was not for me. It seems a peaceful hobby to have.
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed. I still hate sitting about with nothing to do, and knitting ensures that I almost never have to do that any more.
DeleteI was glad to hear that you could work for profit. Not much but what is leisure time worth in $$$?
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Exactly. Knitting never has paid anyone for their "hours"; when done well it does pay for the pleasure people take in it.
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