Sunday, October 16, 2022

Seeing Red Yet?

Red is the color of the autumn leaves
taking their winter holidays from their trees;
when the frost brings them leave to go,
they're in haste to be off before the snow.
The first frost has come and gone. It was brief.
It has hardly colored a maple leaf.
Sumac and sycamore leaves go by light,
leaving when equinox comes into sight.
After a long rainy summer the flowers
of September had hardly enough time to bloom
before Hurricane Ian's edge of cool showers
laid rugs of red leaves on the flowers' room.
Though a touristy town is a tedious thing 
it's always fun to see what the autumn leaves bring:
the more colors in the leaves' bright profusion
the better the seasonal cash infusion
so keep oaks and beeches, whose leaves are strongest;
if not the brightest, show color the longest,
but all maple trees can be tapped for syrup
as well as the reds and the yellows they stir up.
So the tourists had sycamore leaves to view,
and sumac leaves bright as the red maples' hue,
and sunflower, goldenrod, boneset, and asters
distracting their minds from the far-South disasters,
Horrid thoughts? Greedy? It would have been horrider
if they'd found nowhere to be tourists but Florida.
When the rain washed down all the red and brown,
next to leave were the tall tulip poplars' crown,
bright gold leaves shaped like the saddlebacks
between the ridges that steer our tracks.
This rain is washing them down and away,
another light rain that will last all day.
But the oak, beech, and maple leaves are still green;
even dogwood's purple has yet to be seen.
Last week Michigan had all the color
(even Adirondack views seemed duller).
The Blue Ridge still has a look of September.
Has that ever lasted so long before?
Not often; and, as the oldtimers remember,
a wet July made the leaves take more
time to do their work of digesting light
before sun-drying to perfectly bright
color to take their leave and their parting flight.
And the tourists come, and the tourists go.
There's still time to see the leaves' final show. 


From another year, a view of poplar and sumac trees below the Mendota fire tower where birders gather to try to count the migrating hawks. 


14 comments:

  1. Your poem is epic, the rhyme great, like a poetic roadmap. Years ago our family lived in the DC area. A favorite weekend pastime was driving into Virginia, soaking up its beauty.

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  2. Wow, what a rich tapestry! And lovely rhyming.

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    1. Thank you...it's the same form as last week's doggerel, but I think this one is at least a draft of a poem.

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  3. There's a lovely rhythm to the phrases and I like the gentle wit and the rhyming. :)

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  5. Pretty write to match the pretty hills of your photo. "... touristy towns ..." make a fine place to visit, we've visited too many to begin counting.
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    1. Thank you, Jim. Well, we have adorable B&Bs with antique furniture and baskets of books and candy in front of the wide-screen TVs, and we have a couple of fearfully twee little shops that sell generic tourist gifts from China, but most of the stores are still mostly for people who actually live here. It's a local political issue. Some welcome yuppification. I'd prefer to fight it off, especially the yuppies running away from their own neighborhood's last bid for federal grant funds.Yuppies all want to open "upscale" tourist boutiques, which there aren't enough tourists to support, and raise prices and edge out people who live here...

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  6. I used to be one of those tourists - always heading off to see the fall colours!

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    1. Thank you for visiting this web site, Rajani, and despite the cynical view of tourists I take in the poem, I hope you'll find your way to my town one day.

      We don't get too many tourists to *like* them, even though some of us will go all "GOLly, I never SAW anyone from IlliNOIS before!" This should not be mistaken for bigotry. They do it with people who grew up 75 miles away and have been married to a local person for forty years.

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  7. I really like the rhyming in the poem. And it show me things I do not know.
    Living in the tropics, it's hard to imagine autumn, and the one time I experienced it was in Japan, and I was like a child looking at all the red and golden leaves. :)

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  8. We only get a little bit of autumn leave glow in my part of California, compared to the East. I love this time. One day I’d like to be a tourist who has come and gone from seeing Fall back there.

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  9. Rich with wonderful rhyme. Most enjoyable to read… 🙂✌🏼

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