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Wednesday, August 16, 2023
Book Review: The Shoo-Fly Pie
Book Review: The Shoo-Fly Pie
Author: Mildred Jordan
Date: 1944
Publisher: Knopf
ISBN: none
Length: 118 pages
Illustrations: color drawings by Henry C. Pitz
Quote: “Here she was, eight years old already, and people were always telling her she was TOO YOUNG.”
Though not a Pennsylvania German like the characters in this book, Mildred Jordan was once a little girl who was told she was too young to do things. She gathered the nerve to write a child-sized novel by telling herself that people who wrote books weren’t more talented than those who wrote short stories, but merely “worked very, very hard.”
Hard work went into her book. Mildred Jordan learned 55 new words, some technical terms and some German words, to write about a little Pennsylvania German girl who learns how to make shoo-fly pie. It makes better sense than Jordan would have realized to describe all the other farm chores first. If you, the reader, do all the heavy labor this fictional family do, first, you will have revved up your metabolism to the point where eating shoo-fly pie probably won’t make you sick, or even fat. Otherwise it would.
As a one-time diversion for children ,The Shoo-Fly Pie is less annoying than television and video games, and can be recommended as a good, challenging read. Eight-year-olds are capable of learning what “slipware” and “sgraffito” are; some eight-year-olds get tired of being talked down to by writers who assume otherrwise.
Pitz’s drawings, some of which are full-page or two-page color plates, aren’t great art but they are appealing semi-realistic pictures. In some parts of Pennsylvania red squirrels, a separate species that don’t mingle with gray or black squirrels, were the most numerous kind, and yes, their coats really are almost as bright as Pitz painted them. The aqua-blue highlights on a chicken’s wing are a fault: green or blue gloss would be visible on black feathers at that angle, but Pitz forgot the black paint. Such faults sometimes make old books and pictures more valuable to collectors though.
Monday, August 14, 2023
Book Review: King of the Wind
Author: Marguerite Henry
Date: 1948
Publisher: Rand McNally
ISBN: 0-590-45316-5 (Scholastic paperback)
Length: 192 pages
Illustrations: drawings by Wesley Dennis
Quote: “[S]elect six of the most perfect steeds in the royal stables. They will be a gift to His Majesty, Louis XV, the boy King of France.”
There’s just one problem with using the history of the horse known as Godolphin Arabian, or Godolphin Barb, as an inspirational animal story for children: It’s an adult story. To make a novel for children out of it Marguerite Henry had not only to invent a little boy who not only lives with a disability but never seems to grow up or change his clothes, but also to alter the pivotal moment in the horse’s own life in such a way that the inspirational consequences have to be narrated thirdhand.
The broad outline of the story needed no changing, just a little fictional embroidery. History records that in the eighteenth century Sultan Mulai Ismael of Morocco sent six fine Arabian race horses to France for racing and crossbreeding. At the time Europeans were trying to breed fast race horses, but the fashion was for breeding big, heavy, thickset animals (of all species, actually). The preferred types of horses were the ancestors of today's Clydesdales and Percherons. Beside them even healthy, well fed Arabian horses looked small and thin. And these horses, apparently, weren’t well fed when they got to France. Apparently a greedy ship’s captain had supplied scant and poor food for the six horses and the six stable boys who travelled with them. When they got to France the boy king’s many aristocrat advisers sent five horses and boys directly back to Morocco. The palace cook being between horses, one of the bony Arabian stallions was harnessed to the cook’s shopping wagon.
Unaltered male horses aren’t the easiest to handle. Why the cook sold the Arabian horse to a vendor of firewood rather than having him neutered is one of the unanswered questions of history. Anyway, during the tough little horse’s first winter in France, an English visitor found him fallen down on the ice, being beaten by the vendor. The Englishman bought the horse, brought him back to England, and sold him. To the Earl of Godolphin, who wanted to breed race horses. The Earl did not, however, want to breed fine-boned, long-necked Arabian horses. He bought this horse as what horse breeders call a “teaser.”
Horses mate only once a year, and their preferences about exactly when and with whom they will share this moment often conflict with those of humans. The Earl, it seems, had particular problems getting visiting mares interested in his big fat male horse, and had noticed that they seemed to find the Arabian stallion more interesting. So the job of the stable boy, who history records was still travelling with the horse, was to lead the Arabian horse out to greet visiting mares before the mares were led in to mate with the Earl’s stallions.
“Stud farms” are not as idyllic as non-horsey men fantasize that they would be. Unaltered male horses do not have a natural instinct to graze peaceably in herds like cows. Nor do horses pair off and live in human-type families. Male horses fight, sometimes to the death, to select one leader who is then allowed to mate with all the females who form his herd. Young horses follow their mothers about until they reach adolescence, when the males start fighting. Most males will try to go their own way and perhaps start their own herds, if they can. But on stud farms there’s no place for them to go, so all these male horses spend their days indoors. Their instincts give them a tendency to be hostile and dangerous at best. Since their situations are not the best, from their point of view, the expectation is that they’ll become vicious, and can be handled only by teams of professionals using various restraining devices, sometimes including drugs. Nobody expects a male horse who is kept specifically for breeding purposes to be pleasant to have around. A male horse who is free to roam a pasture with a mini-herd of female and/or neutered horses and other animals is nearly always easier for everyone, including himself, to live with, and may even make himself useful, if only to one particular human friend.
The Godolphin Arabian had such a friend in the stable boy who came with him from Morocco. Who this man was, where he came from, whether he was completely unable to speak or just never learned to speak English, have been lost to history. The Earl called him Agba. Both horse and man were young when they came to England; they grew up, and the horse grew old, on the Godolphin farm.
The adolescent horse was led out to meet several females who were then bred with the Earl’s male horses before, as young male horses used as “teasers” will, he realized he was old enough to mate, too. Probably with the connivance of his human friend, he “broke loose” from the team of men who were supposed to control the male horses. He whipped the bigger, lazier, older horse in a fair fight and, as male horses do after winning a fight, mated with the female “before his handler could stop him.” The Earl was not pleased.
But he kept the mare and her colt, along with the other colts his horses had produced, and he soon saw that the lean and wiry Arabian-British crossbreed colt was faster than any of his purebred British colts. Or, it turned out, than anybody else’s. The Godolphin Arabian’s first two colts were called Lath, meaning a thin bit of wood shaved off on a lathe, and Cade, meaning the smallest young animal in a litter—and they won races under those names. The Godolphin Arabian’s third colt was called Regulus, because he was expected to win races regularly, and he did. These and the Godolphin Arabian’s other crossbreed offspring became the founders of the Thoroughbred breed. Two other male Arabian horses were imported to England. Before long, one-mile races were restricted to Thoroughbreds—descendants of these three stallions, whose offspring were then bred with one another. On one side or another the Godolphin Arabian was an ancestor to almost every horse whose name you’ve seen in the newspapers: Man o’ War, Black Gold, Native Dancer, Secretariat, Seattle Slew, Seabiscuit, Barbaro, Smarty Jones...
Horsey adults have long enjoyed the ironic history of the first Thoroughbred horses, but it’s hardly an edifying story for middle school readers. Making it one remained for Marguerite Henry to do. She did this by telling the story from the point of view of Agba, about whom the real world knows nothing, which left Henry free to invent an inspirational little story based on what really happened to children whose parents had died young and poor in the eighteenth century. Agba is taught nothing but how to groom horses. We learn with him about the body proportions required for show-quality Arabians, but mostly we see him being loyal to his horse.
In the children’s story version, the horse just eats, rests, or runs about, often carrying Agba and their pet cat, in between intervals of starvation, until he falls in love with the Earl’s youngest mare. The urge to inject an “affectional” quality to animal sexuality rings about as false as Agba’s reaction when he and the horse and the cat are banished from the stables to an isolated property down in the Fens, then brought back when the Earl sees how Lath can run. At Wicken Fen he sees only one other human being, a poacher; free to farm or fish, he doesn’t learn how to do either, but subsists on barley cooked in brackish polluted water. We can believe he might have been shy enoough to feel not much more isolated during this time than he is by his muteness all the time, but I suspect a real man would think of better rations at the Earl’s farm, new clothes, and presumably a little pocket money, before thinking about the horse’s reputation. Well, read the book. Maybe, if you’re as goodhearted as Agba, and a horse is what you have to love, you might think of the horse’s reputation first. I’ve never been sure.
Henry also gave the horse an Arabic name: one of the simplest sords in the language, Sham, “sun,” although the horse’s coat was usually described as the shade of brown called “bay.” Though, if the stable boy really couldn’t speak at all, the horse would never have answered to that name either, many Thoroughbreds don’t know their official registered names. Stable staff often give them simpler, more descriptive nicknames, often things like “Horse” or “Big Boy.” Man o’ War, the newspapers reported, actually answered to “Big Red.” The Godolphin Arabian might have had a grandiose official name like "King of the Wind," and "daughters of the wind" is a traditional name for Arabian mares, but whether the horse had a name will never be known. To the Earl his being an "Arabian" or "Barb" was distinctive enough.
In any case, most children who like horse stories like Marguerite Henry’s. Though what I currently have for resale is a reprint with only a few of the original illustrations, I recommend looking for the original if you can find it. Most of the illustrations in children’s books are badly done, included just to distract the eye, but Wesley Dennis’s horse and dog drawings are lifelike. Children who consciously study how to draw and paint animal pictures, with or without humans and landscapes in them, will want to study all of his. If you grew up with a copy of King of the Wind that had the full-page color pictures in it, a reprint with only the little black-and-white pictures above the chapter headings seems unsatisfactory somehow.
Thursday, August 3, 2023
Book Review: Lunch Money
Title: Lunch Money
Author: Andrew Clements
Date: 2007
Publisher: Simon & Schuster
ISBN: 978-0-689-86683-8
Length: 222 pages
Illustrations: pencil drawings by Brian Selznick
Quote: “Greg’s greatest talent had always been money.”
Even before he started school, we’re told, Greg enjoyed earning, saving, and eventually spending money. He started by doing his older brothers’ chores for pennies, then moved into doing odd jobs. Then one day at school he noticed how many of the other middle-schoolers had pocket money to spare when he forgot his lunch money, and started selling pocket toys for his friends’ pocket money. The principal’s reaction was to ban all toys. Greg started writing, drawing, printing, and selling original comic books. The principal wanted to ban that too, because right away a few other kids started selling their own “books,” and the principal didn’t want the school to become “a flea market.”
Andrew Clements’ greatest talent has always been writing plausible “What if a kid...?”stories that illustrate what’s not likely, but possible, if kids do what it takes...to add a new word to the dictionary (Frindle), or to become a small publishing venture. And he’s right on target. The biggest challenge kids face, when they come up with ideas for earning their own money, is that some adults really don’t want kids to have their own money.
Adults want kids to be honest and ethical. Kids want to be honest and ethical, and they also want to have and do things that appeal to them, without necessarily taking the time to “sell” some adult or other on everything they fancy. When adults cling to control fantasies, blustering that fifth-graders (and older people) “don’t need to be able to buy junkfood,”or comic books or pocket toys or whatever, some parents can boast of some success in brainwashing their kids not to want junkfood—sometimes—but even goody-goody kids who’ve tried very hard to believe that buying a chocolate bar will give them acne, and that they would want not to have acne, are still likely to think they want this particular toy, or whatever. So they might start skipping lunch and hoarding their lunch or milk money...or they might decide that, in a world where adults just don’t want them to have anything they see other children enjoying, they have a right to steal either the objects or the money they want.
I once heard a sixth-grader explain that she stole a twenty-dollar bill from an adult’s purse to buy a cross pendant necklace to show schoolmates she was a Christian.
Yes, adults can try to tighten their grip on all access to the outside world and bring up children who will really stand out, when they have to look for jobs in the outside world, as too eccentric to be employable. There are people who became unemployable to the church that had supported the rigid rules that were meant to make a virtue of an economic necessity, because they really believed that some extravagance or other was contrary to the Spirit of God. And the extravagance may be trivial, but the way their refusal to embrace it has been persecuted convinces some of these people, and convinces me, that it really is contrary to the Spirit of God.
If adults aren’t able—as Amish people are—to guarantee their children a secure position in an independent economic community where they’ll be able to earn modest livings and achieve a reasonable level of status among adults, then those adults had better not be allowed to cling to any delusions about teaching their children a “better” approach to money than good old small-scale capitalism. But unfortunately that’s become a fad these days, not even among small religious sects, but among people who consider themselves “liberal.”
The real motive is control. “It’s so sweet and lovable and innocent when children come to you begging ‘Please, Mommy, please, Daddy’...”Yes, and when we consider the kind of skills that’s teaching those children, let’s just hope Mommy and Daddy will always be able to bail them out of jail. Some parents fantasize that they’re bringing up future teachers or doctors when they are in fact training future beggars, pickpockets, and prostitutes. The rationalization used to be keeping children out of bad company, teaching them thrift, or preparing girls to be “angels in the home." Today few people take those ideas seriously, so control-freak parents have to appeal to the political cults of yesteryear. “We don’t want Alex to grow up a greedy, money-grubbing yuppie...”
Normal healthy children do not like to go to adults begging. Nature intended them to become adults, and that is the primary goal of most things children do between, say, ages five and fifteen. They like to earn their own money and spend it as they see fit.
So, our protagonist, Greg, sees school as a place to earn money because he sees that it’s a place where children are expected, even required, to spend money and have a lot of money to spend. Adults don’t want him to earn money at school, however, because some of them are control freaks...and others are profiting from protectionist contracts.
Greg, being an Andrew Clements character, does almost everything right. His mistakes are minor and quickly corrected, so they form part of a story that’s basically about how the child reader can succeed. Greg takes a bump on the nose, realizes the teacher looking at him is having a phobic reaction, and makes a horrible little speech about how, yes, his nose is “bleeding lots of bloody, bloody blood.” The mere word “blood” makes poor phobic Mr. Z. feel so queasy that he feels a need to lie on the floor.
Er, well, actually I suspect that a sixth grade boy would be thinking in pictures, and the picture in his mind would be of what naturally happens next if people who are feeling queasy enough to lie down continue to feel even a tiny bit sicker.
But anyway Greg and Mr. Z. bond by lying on the floor and waiting for someone to press ice packs on their heads, and Mr. Z. agrees to be the adult consultant as Greg recruits his strongest competitor as a partner in producing clever, informative, nonviolent cartoon books.
That competitor is a girl, Maura. Some sixth grade boys feel physically attracted to girls in a vague way. Probably more of them feel embarrassed by the idea that talking to girls might cause them to be teased about things they don’t understand. A fortunate few have sisters and know that, in grade six, talking to a girl is pretty similar to talking to a boy—individual personalities make more of a difference than gender. Then there’s a small, in some ways unfortunate, few who do in fact have the hormone reactions most sixth grade students can only embarrass each other about. Even when students this age are shaving facial hair or wearing bras, most of them are not feeling physical attractions yet. So why Clements chose to make Greg one of the few who has “feelings” other than the basic “Do I want this person as a friend and, if so, on what terms” feeling...was probably in hopes of marketing the book to grade eight, where more students do have special physical “feelings” about some classmates that they don’t have about all the others. Some readers will like the idea that Greg and Maura will become a couple and possibly marry each other in another ten years, and some will hate it. So, trigger warning. Maybe some books should reassure kids that they’re not going to die of freakishness if they have feelings at eleven that many people start having at fifteen. Maybe adults should blame the estrogen-fattened meat.
Greg and Maura and Mr. Z. now have to convince the principal that her argument that “school is a place for learning and thinking, not for buying and selling,” is unrealistic. When students buy food, pencils and paper, maybe school jackets and sports equipment, in a school store, then school is a place for buying and selling. And what a pity the school’s decisions are made by a “council of principals” rather than a board of elected members of the community, in which there would probably be a good healthy exponent of an (enlightened) capitalist position: School stores should, in fact, set a goal of having more than half the merchandise made and sold by students and their parents. What a pity, for that matter, Greg’s and Maura’s parents leave it entirely up to a teacher to advocate for their children’s economic rights to become entrepreneurs in a free, non-protectionist market system.
If anything, I think Clements handles the control-freak principal more gently than control freaks deserve. And why the relationships between the students and their parents aren’t developed further...Sometimes writers back away from trying to write about parent-child relationships because, even as adults, the writers are still learning from those relationships. Sometimes writers don’t want people who know that the writers have stayed close to their own parents to think that the writers’fictional characters’family relationships are just like the writers’family relationships. Well. If writers were more reticent about romantic relationships, for similar reasons, the improvement in some fiction would be considerable.
I find Greg and Maura, their relationship with each other, and their relationships with their parents, a bit of a strain on my suspension of disbelief, but their experience of producing “Chunky Comics”is probably what actual sixth grade students will read this book for, and that is excellent. Selznick’s illustrations even give young cartoonists ideas for layout.
Monday, May 21, 2018
Book Review: Betsy-Tacy
Tuesday, May 1, 2018
Book Review: Midnight Is a Place

(This book has been reprinted several times. What you see is the cover design for the book I physically have for sale; I have the original hardcover edition, too, and that one I'm keeping. Since the paperback I have is showing at an unreasonable price on Amazon, the link will take you to a newer edition that's still available as a new book for a more realistic price.)
Author: Joan Aiken
Date: 1974
Publisher: Viking
ISBN: 0-670-47483-5
Length: 287 pages
Quote: “Even in good weather the park around Midnight Court was not a cheerful place.”
In 1842, in the real world, industrialization was raising British awareness of pollution and economic oppression to unprecedented levels. In Joan Aiken’s fictional alternative-nineteenth-century world, the blasted and burnt-out city of Blastburn, later to be taken over by Dido Twite’s horrid uncle, epitomizes everything Dickens’ and Disraeli’s novels railed against. (Did you know Disraeli wrote novels? If not, and if you like Aiken's and Dickens', you are in for a treat.)
Midnight Court is the ancestral manor young Lucas Bell, Anna-Marie Murgatroyd, and some equally unfortunate older people stand to inherit from the thoroughly unpleasant Sir Randolph Grimsby, who, fairly early in the book, burns down the main house rather than pay the taxes on it. Suicide turns out to be the most public-spirited thing Sir Randolph has ever done, and after some horrid experiences of child labor with employers who are trying to kill them, the children settle down to share the outbuildings, associated properties, and income from Midnight Court with the nicest adults they meet.
How the children survive and earn a living is the plot, and will not be spoiled here. Suffice it to say that yes, in 1842, real English and American children did have to work for their livings if they were orphans or even if their parents were poor, and fishing for salvageable items in the sewers, re-rolling remnants of tobacco out of cigar ends, and running machines in factories, were among the jobs actually done by children of thirteen, or even eight years old. In the United States girls, and boys under sixteen, were barred from working underground in coal mines (although children sometimes worked above ground outside the mines); in England children as young as six worked in the narrowest shafts of coal mines.
Lucas and Anna-Marie are typical of the pair of gifted children that appear like a signature in each of Joan Aiken’s novels. Usually, as here, regardless of any age disparities they are fully equal to each other—often the only real peers they have. Anna-Marie is a bit of the strain on the imagination until we remember she’s described mostly through Lucas’s eyes; to him she looks five or six rather than eight years old, then seems to become an adult, overnight, as she realizes that any comforting or nurturing that’s to be done will be done by her. To herself she’s simply herself, a young orphan who learns many things more quickly than the average child. One of those things she learns quickly is that playing mother to her older cousin is less painful than sulking and crying alone.
There were real children like that in 1842: orphans, or functional-equivalents-of-orphans, who had to become “little men” and “little women” overnight in order to survive. One week they might have had nurserymaids and tutors to look after them; the next week they were out on the street, doing whatever cooking and cleaning could be done for themselves, and, if possible, trying to latch on to nice older kids for protection from mean, thieving, bullying older kids. And adults. In Merrie Olde agricultural England such children were probably doing some farm chores, and thus entitled to some help from the lord of the manor. In the cities, or if the manor were being taken over by an unhelpful lord, they had no claim on anything from anybody. They were expected to become thieves or prostitutes or both, then subject to severe penalties if forced into even small steps in either of those directions.
Lucas and Anna-Marie are particularly lovable children. They have no legal claim on each other’s help either, nor are they legally responsible for the care of Lucas’s badly injured tutor. They help each other, and eke out their pathetic wages to pay for the care of the tutor, because they are (I suspect) idealized versions of Aiken’s own children: the way any mother would want her children to grow up. Their niceness is what gives them, and the adults who help them, a plot.
Because there were people like Lucas and Anna-Marie in our world, the idea of a Welfare State came to exist. Couldn’t democratic governments afford to set up whole offices dedicated to the care of orphans? The extent to which the Welfare State has alleviated or aggravated the sufferings of orphans remains a matter of some debate but in any case Anglo-type children no longer find themselves obliged to apply for the very nastiest jobs anyone can imagine.(In China, however, children still reportedly recycle toxic waste...)
Midnight Is a Place is fiction. For a sex-free, romance-free, kid-friendly story (although it was marketed to adults, because it contains violence) it can even be described as “Romantic” fiction—the kind of story that sold during the “Romantic Period” of English literature (the early nineteenth century): It features improbable hair-raising adventures barely survived by improbably lovable characters and a set of coincidences that give the story an improbably tidy ending. Nevertheless, the Romantic Period existed because adventures almost, if not quite, as outrageous as Gil Blas
In any case, all readers are supposed to ask of fiction is an entertaining read, and that Aiken always delivered. Vivid descriptions, an all-prevailing cheerfulness in the grimmest of situations, about as much irony as anyone can stand, make Midnight Is a Place a great deal more fun to read than it would have been to live through.
Wednesday, September 27, 2017
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Book Review: The Street of the Flower Boxes
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